Could He Be the One? Chap 25 – Story

Hannah thank you so much!!!

Ruby S. :D thanks so much! :D

Alyssa oh that?s okay :D I’m just glad you commented on this one. I?m really glad that you like it so much :D and even more glad that you are happy that I used your name :D Thanks so much!! I really hope you like this one :D

Beatrice oh haha you really scared me when I read the first nine words of your comment “You know what Marie i don’t like you anymore.” wow? I was thinking “What did I dooo??” but then I read the rest and I was like “ohhhh. Now I feel silly” :P anyway thank you so so so much!! It makes me so happy to know you like it so much D: haha yeah, I would have loved to have the piano drop on Jayden :D I?m really glad you like it and I wish I could keep it going for forever? that?d be fun. But its coming close to ending? probably in the next few chapters. I?m not sure how much longer I can keep it going. But I will try. Thanks so so so much! And I wish the same thing too. Especially cause Im having boy problems right now, but thanks so much :D I really hope you like this chapter :D

Maria thank you!!! :D

Sakura Haha thanks!!! It definitely will :D thanks so much!!!! And you?re welcome :D

Evalyn haha thanks and I do sometimes? but a lot of the times I forget that people might have commented on previous chapters? :P anyway thank you so much!! I?m really glad you like it. Haha no? that?s not bad. I was smiling very much when I wrote that part haha! He deserved it :P thanks so so so much!!!!

Chally haha yep :D thank you so so much!!!!

Jessica aww!!! I?m so glad that you almost cried? does that sound mean? that?s not the way I mean it to be. I?m just so glad that I was able to write something very sweet and touching and happy haha :D thank you so much!!! I don?t know how much more I will be able to write for this but I will definitely try to make it go longer. :D

Fallon haha I?m glad you like it :D I didn?t know what to do for Trae since he had liked Lexi and then I was like? Alia!!! She?d be perfect!! So I?m very glad you liked it. I was wondering how people would take that one. Thanks so much!!!!

Esmeralda thank you!!! And yep they are?. Is that a bad thing or a good thing in your opinion??

Abrokenheart thank you!!! Haha yeah, that?s what I wanted people to think. And yes I do have another story in mind and I will start working on that as soon as I finish the two other stories I am working on right now :D thanks so much!!

Xtine wow!! Thank you so much! I?m so glad you liked it!!!

Stella Haha yeah, I really liked them together :D I hope you like this chapter!!

Jam. Thank you!!!!

Darshanetta haha yeah I wanted you guys to think that, but I knew she would pick seth all along? :D haha!! I?m glad you liked it :D I really hope you like this one too!!!

Chapter 25

We walked down a dirt trail that was behind my house, down to a small pond, hidden from view of the house. The pond was more like a small lake, with a sandy bottom, and clear water. I waded in up to my knees and stood there, looking at Seth. He had sat down on a rock a few inches from the water and he looked up at me and smiled.
“Come here!” I waved my hand, gesturing for him to come over. He stood up and stepped into the water. I could feel excitement mounding in me. I waited until he stood next to me, before I stood up on my toes to kiss him. I pulled away, but he put one of his hands on my hip, keeping me close to him. He used his other hand to cup my chin, and tilt it up slightly. He bent his head down a little and pressed his lips to mine.

He moved his hand to my neck, his lips to my cheek and then my jaw, then trailed down my neck, then back up to my lips. I felt his tongue enter my mouth, deepening the kiss. I moved one hand to his shoulder, the other to the back of his neck, against his hair. Rain started pouring down, drenching us. He moved the hand that was on my waist, to the small of my back, pushing me closer against him. I shivered from the cold water pouring down on us.
I could feel his hand, playing with the wet strands of my hair as we continued to kiss. He stopped the kiss, slowly, and then just held me tightly against him. I breathed in his cologne, that the rain was beginning to wash off, realizing with a surge of joy that it was the same as before I?d had to leave.

Thunder boomed and I jumped. “C?mon! Let?s go!” I pulled away from him to head home. “I hate thunder.” He reached out for my hand and stepped forward. He tripped on something and splashed into the water, pulling me with him. We started laughing. He pressed his lips to mine again, as we sat in the water, but lightning flashed and the thunder cracked and I jumped again. I stood up quickly. “Oh my gosh! We?re in water and it?s lightning!” I ran out of the water, and turned at the edge waiting for Seth. He hurried over, took my hand and we ran home.
We walked into the house, hand in hand, to see everyone sitting at the couch, watching a movie. Alia was drinking something, that smelled like hot chocolate, from a red mug and I grinned. That was just like her? drinking hot chocolate in the summer.

“Ooh. The lovebirds are back.” She said smiling at me. I blushed, and then remembered we were drenched.
“I?m gonna go change.” I said to Seth, “Are you gonna stay here or go home?”
“I?d stay here, but I?m soaked.”
A voice came from the recliner chair, I turned to see Sarah holding a bag. “I saw you and Lexi go walking and when it started to rain and I brought some clothes over, knowing you?d probably need them, and then their mom invited me to stay for dinner.”

“Thanks.” Seth said, taking the bag. “I guess I?ll change in the bathroom.” He said, heading toward it. I ran upstairs to my room, happily. I stood at the bureau, trying to decide what to wear. I decided on a black t-shirt and a pair of jeans. I pulled on a pair of socks because my feet were freezing and then went to the bathroom next to my room. (Seth was in the other bathroom.) I blow dried my hair and then went to the living room. Seth was sitting on the floor, next to the couch. When he saw me he smiled. I walked over to sit next to him, but he pulled me onto his lap.
I laid my head back onto his chest, smiling. I closed my eyes and thought of how perfect my life was right now. How amazing my boyfriend was, and how awesome everything had turned out.
Seth my cheek, then whispered in my ear, interrupting my thoughts, “I love you Alexia.”

So that?s the last chapter everyone. What?d you think??? Please comment!!!!

(By the way, I rewrote this chapter like 4 times because I just couldn?t get it right. So I really hope you all liked it.) And do any of you want me to go through it and fix all the mistakes and re-post it in as little pieces as possible, or not?

 

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